Can someone please proof my letter thanking a company for an interview today. I need help with punctuation.?

in the first sentence you need to take out one of the takings...its bad grammar to use the same work in a sentence twice. i would start of by saying i would like to thank you for taking the time to interview with me today (unless your giving this letter to them the actual date of the interview i would change today) for the istant position...they know what company they work for so you don't need ot remind them its sounds lame. i wold take out the life long career part and just put career life long is a long time to be promising a company. take out the part about the family thing this needs to be very professional and talking about family is not. the last sentence in the second paragraph is a run on sentence you need some sort of punctuation in it. take out the part about times being tough and unemployed people it sounds desperate. take out "please call them to hear what kind of employee I am." it sounds like you have prepped your references on what to say if they do call. and the last sentence should only say I am extremely interested in the position with Hunt Construction and I hope to hear from you soon.